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The story has 3 parts

2 small climaxes, 1 big climax

First climax: A fight between elites, Valashi, and Rexom team. Valashi wins, and Elites come on Rexom’s side. And Rexom knows Valashi’s plans, and Maklevien is the one who kills Zefor but no one knows who killed him.

Second climax: The devil finds Valashi incapable and betrays him and makes plans with Maklevien. A fight between The first shadow and Valashi and elites and Maklevien and Rexom, where Maklevien kills Valashi, betrays Rexom and gets on the devil’s side.

Third climax: Maklevien gets back with Rexom and together they defeat the devil’s final form.

Devil is someone who got lucky enough to have the red color first, then go to black color with his clone and become the first shadow.

The devil wants to gather all the Arevatt boxes and make a huge box to transfer himself into a god. Every mage he captures will become a part of his power to a stronger being.

The head of the guild of mages, Rynyer, has the calls for 34 obsidian chambers. There are 3 other chambers in blue red and green that the devil has to capture. 1 fulgurite chamber. And 2 tektite chamber.

When the devil goes free he attacks the guild of mages and kills Rynyer. He builds his basement at the edge of the world in some tunnels. He now seeks 6 other boxes. So he makes 34 Impalers out of 34 mages and starts massacring everywhere to find the other 6 boxes.

Valashi’s plan: When he is free he has one thing. Rexom’s chamber. Valashi has seen the devil in his dreams so he knows what he wants. He goes to the devil and says he was the one who shut the doors on the gods so he makes a deal. “I will give you the 6 remaining boxes. You give me permission to take my revenge.” The devil gives him the 34 impalers and waits until he is done with his revenge.

But his real plan is to capture the elites, kill the devil, get all the boxes and do what the devil wanted to do.

Valashi reports to Zefor about the next Impalers attacks and then asks for the elite’s locations. He says he needs to collect them if he wants to have a chance of defeating the devil. He finds Ufery and tells her that he knows where the shadow is and how they can take revenge on him. Ufery says they have already seen the shadow killing the impalers so he has to be lying. Ufery tries to catch him but Valashi escapes using the impalers. Valashi figures out that there is a second shadow and he thinks it’s Rexom, so he tries to bait her.

Valashi: Valashi wants to kill the devil and take his place.

How can he kill the devil? By collecting all three kinds of boxes. Obsidian from one of the elites. Fulgurite by Rexom, and Tektite he has it.

His first step is killing Zefor and gaining his call.

For that, he needs to provoke the elites to start a war against Cavebris.

He provokes the elites by telling them 

Valashi talks to the elites and wants to signal three different impalers attacks and then release all the Impalers on Reisova. He introduces the devil as the shadow and the impalers as his puppets.

Lore

The creator of the chamber of boxes was looking for a peaceful sleep where he has a second chance in life. The creator of the chamber has a doctrine, that no one should explore the further limits of the arevatt boxes for it leads to disaster. He himself created the first shadow and then gave his life to control the world from above. The world now knows him as the god. And the guild of mages has a doctrine from the past.

Valashi mistakes him for the god who said you shouldn’t go further. And he did. And he should suffer for eternity. Valashi kills the god and the god pleads for him to never sleep. Valashi finally sleeps and realizes his mistake. And that he should now deal with the devil.

Valashi and Rexom are captured with the help of elites and the church.

Rexom and Valashi, 2 of the first members of the guild of mages, were experimenting and researching new types of boxes, to prevent the deaths of people. They discovered fulgurite glass. In their first experiment, their case manifests red smoke but dies. They are disappointed. In the next experiment, their case gives blue smoke and dies. They try for the third time. And their case shows dark color and survives. Soon they realize how powerful he is, they get to know about the dragon. But their case turns more and more selfish and evil every day. Until they are forced to destroy his box. And burn his body.

They continue their research and next they find Tektite glass. But the guild of mages had enough of their destruction so doesn’t give them a case. Rexom and Valashi didn’t want to take the risk either, but later they decided to try it, by themselves, together. When they are in the boxes, for once, they are everywhere, part of the universe, visible to all the worlds, and they see a dark figure telling them, “Fear of gods… They are power, power is them… wretch souls for eternity… what is written will be fulfilled.”

Valashi gets scared. He and Rexom have fights over the morality of the plan. Rexom argues that “the ones before us have paid the price. We should too. But we pass this knowledge for others. Closing the spiritual path will cause mayhem. You cannot change your fate.” But Valashi happens to be a better fighter. Rexom attempts to destroy the boxes, but Valashi hides the chamber of the boxes.

Valashi was the first person who was able to climb the altitudes, in an attempt to change his fate, closing the outer gate by killing the guardians. To prevent any soul or god from trans-passing. When he returns, he claims to have killed the god and is ready to take over the world. His sign was the disorder built by 100 days of rain. There are riots from the church, they imprison Valashi and ban the use of magic. Rexom hides. The guild of mages turns into a hidden and small order, that kidnaps children and sells mages to kingdoms.

Little did he know, the person telling him that was the first shadow, hidden for the fear of gods. After 820 years, Valashi falls asleep. And the first shadow is able to get into his mind and realizes that the gates are closed.

The first shadow comes out into the world and makes himself an army of demons. He is ready to take over the world and the gods. Zefor, an atheist, believes that Valashi has killed a god, so consults Valashi in secret and asks for Valashi’s help to kill the devil. Zefor frees Valashi. And things get worse. Valashi joins the first shadow to take over the world and destroy the gods.

 

 

 

God is a man who first discovers the Arevatt box. He experiments with it and creates mages. One of his intelligent students, RyNyer suggests him the art of merging the boxes. God accepts his offer and turns him into a red color, then puts him in the black box and turns him into a shadow. Rynyer’s clone becomes his pet, the shadow, and he calls him Valashi. Rynyer becomes so corrupt and strong that God is forced to threaten him. Rynyer goes and hides at the edge of the world and God goes to the altitudes and watches, the moment Rynyer goes out, God will kill him. God writes a doctrine that strictly bans the further discovery of the boxes. Valashi is almost sentient. He is planned by Rynyer at the edge of the world. Valashi goes to the guild of mages and becomes friends with Rexom. He talks about the death of many people for using the only common box and the possibility of many other colors. At first, Rexom is against it but then she gets convinced. Rexom convinces the head of the guild of mages to give them a chance for the Fulgurite box they have discovered. Their experiment goes terribly. They create the second shadow and he has a dragon that casts destruction. They immediately shatter the box and hide it on the islands. Next, they find Tektite glass. This time the head of the guild of mages disagrees and tells them that they have to stop their experiments. They decide to make two Tektite glasses and use them both. They decide to have each other’s call to stop each other from destruction. But Valashi manipulates her and gets both of the calls. When they go inside the box, in the transformation process they see a black figure threatening them they will have no soul and life and live in pain for not taking the doctrine seriously. RyNyer wished this to help Rexom join Valashi in killing the god. But Rexom opposes it and becomes Valashi’s foe after realizing Valashi’s manipulation. Valashi goes to the altitudes and kills the god under the orders and summonings of RyNyer. God has the ability to summon and shatter every box. But since Valashi is an immortal clone, God is confused that he can’t summon his box and tries to kill him but it doesn’t work either so finally gets defeated. When God is dying he realizes that he is a clone of RyNyer, he transfers his consciousness into Valashi and makes him sentient. Then Valashi realizes his mistakes and stops answering to RyNyer. And RyNyer is thinking that God defeated his clone and he doesn’t dare to go out. Valashi doesn’t sleep to not be haunted by RyNyer. He tells people that he has killed the god and now needs help to kill the devil for he is much stronger. People especially the church see it as blasphemy and capture and chain him. In fear, Rexom hides on an island because she is the next immortal.

Part 1 

Goals:

Introduction of characters. Maklevien, Rexom, Valashi, Zefor, and elites. Small glimpse into Aritees.

At the end of the first part, Maklevien and Rexom should get close. It will be a gradual process.

At the first part, Rexom team, Valashi and Elites are looking for the atomic device.

 

Zefor’s goal: get the kingdoms on his side using Valashi’s power.

Valashi gives him something better with that, a zeppelin. Zeppelin helps them go to the island of atomic device. With that, Zefor will have utter power, not only on neighbor kingdoms, but also other continents.

With that he can re-ignite his ancestor’s legacy, and pass it on his children.

 

Valashi’s goal: Find Rexom, and give her the god code, and kill Aritees.

Valashi knows the Zeppelin is Rexom’s secret. So taking away her Zeppelin will expose her. So he can find her.

Valashi hopes that Zefor getting the Zeppelin puts Rexom and Zefor opposite of each other.

The atomic device has a self-destructive attribute and Valashi knows it. He manipulates Zefor into using it, she when Zefor dies, Valashi gets back his call.

Valashi wants to compensate for what he did to Rexom.

 

Rexom’s goal: Get the atomic device, and kill herself. And when it doesn’t work, get her call from Valashi, and kill herself.

 

Maklevien’s goal: Get the atomic device and gain power for himself, his wife and other members of their underground. When his wife dies, he just wants revenge. But he slowly forgets his goals and becomes a power consuming selfish monster.

 

At the end there is a fight between Rexom, Valashi and elites. Rexom and Mak win, Rexom uses the atomic device while Valashi witnesses from a hidden place.

 

Mak is in the underground discussing the political situations with his underground members. Zefor has just released Valashi. 34 elites died with the head of the guild of mages. They are poor and wretched. People are in a riot against Zefor. Jin, a priest, comes to Mak and gives him some

 

The story begins with a zeppelin. Why is Zeppelin important?

 

Zefor is in war with neighbor kingdoms. Zefor has an empire. The kingdoms have allied against him. The kingdoms have elites. The elites are being attacked by Aritees. Zefor has no elites. His plan is to free the Valashi to get the Aritees, and make it a way of friendship with the kingdoms.

Valashi has another plan.